一：开头

　　句子的开头方式，不要一味地都是主语开头，接着是谓语、宾语，最后再加一个状语。可以把状语置于句首，或用分词做状语等。

　　〔原文〕We met at the school gate and went there together early in the morning.

　　〔修正〕Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together.

　　〔原文〕The young man couldn’t help crying when he heard the bad news.

　　〔修正〕Hearing the bad news， the young man couldn’t help crying.

　　二、结尾

　　1、 All in all, what really matters is, in fact, that……(比如说到和谐社会 All in all, what really matters is, in fact, that we should build our society a harmonious society.)

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　　affair, business, matter 代替 thing

　　for my part, from my own perspective 代替 in my opinion

　　beneficial, rewarding 代替 helpful

　　exceedingly, extremely, intensely 代替 very

　　pour attention into代替 pay attention to

　　bear in mind that代替remember

　　enjoy, possess代替 have

　　to name only a few/ as an example代替for example/ instance